Simply Simple

I had never imagined of writing  something like this that I have written below. Please read and post your response on this..

Is Duniya ke rango ke saath kismat badlti hain,
tadapti hain yeh badal aur yeh samah jab suraj apni tez par hota hain,
har savera ek naya josh lekar aata hain,
pattaro se pani bhi nikal aata hain jab kudrat tumahara saath deta hain,
kash hum kehne ka mauka nahin dena chahte lekin waqt hum se sab karwata hain,
yeh mausam ke Gane badalo main suraj ki kiran ek asha lati hain,
Waqt se pehle hum kabhi kuch nahin pate kudrat ko vada hain hum apni kismat se ladenge, jeetenge,
aaj bhi woh bachpana hamari chehre pe hasi le aati hain jab hume bachpana door hote dikhta hain..

I would like to request to give me feedback on this..

Emotions

To understand Human Psychology is one of the most fundamental aspect of life. Today, people talk so much about improving life and living conditions but tend to forget basic factors which keep's life happy. Not only corporate companies or brand which makes innumerable promise to customer while selling the product which will enhance but,  the result of the product is something different. I am sure I do not need to mention examples here because today customers are much more aware and still fall into the trap. But during this exercise we tend to forget the simple aspects of life. We tend to forget cherish simple aspects of life for existence. With due respect to every emotions there is one emotion which is called kindness is loosing its importance in today's life. Because everything here in this life is becoming meager becoming a need. Why is always there a need of some instigating factor to arise the feelings and it does not arise proactively?